by Darthwing Teorist on Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:10 am
WARNING: For the people who did not read this story yet, my post contains some spoilers.
Given that it was Halloween and all, I decided to see what is all this fascination with Lovecraft and I started by reading "The Shadow out of Time". This may seem like blasphemy to certain hardcore fans, but I found this particular story to fail achieving it's purpose, which was to horrify or terrify me. It could be that the story did not age well or maybe I am getting older and more demanding upon the fiction that I read. A little note about myself: I am the kind of person who finds it quite easy to suspend his disbelief. For example when people criticized Star Wars for a few physical impossibilities, such as the fact that Tie Fighters and other spacecraft do not make noise in space, I came up with the rationalization that each craft may be equipped with a system giving feedback about it's environment using other senses than sight, such as giving the location and type of various ships in space using sound.
That said, here are my impressions: I selected this one because the title seemed very promising, I was expecting to at least be disturbed in some way. The story started quite well, building up a frightening and sinister atmosphere: slowly and with vague allusions to terrifying facts and events. The use of adjectives was quite abundant and in the beginning was working well. However, the more that I advanced in the story, the more that the same technique was used without giving any more details that would be really terrifying. I can understand that the may character may have felt terrified by finding out about a mighty race that can reach across space and time and switch minds between bodies. But, letting alone all scientific problems that this raises, the fact that the Great Race was quite benevolent made it a bit silly to continue describing these beings as "shambling horrors". There were other references in the same style to "blasphemous" knowledge, when in fact the said knowledge was simply science and nothing about it seemed blasphemous at all. The fact that the human race did not survive, can be disturbing but it shouldn't have been to the character, who as a scientist could have envisioned that possibility quite easily. Now, the only thing that seemed really terrifying, was the Elder race. I was looking forward to learn more about them and the horrors that they unleashed but was very disappointed to learn that all they did was stirring some anomalous wind. When the main character fell into their domain through a chasm, what did he do? He actually swam upward THROUGH THEM and got away free! For beings that terrorized the mightiest race known to have walked (or shambled) the earth, they did not seem able to do much harm, if a tired, half-crazy middle aged scientist managed to get away unscathed from them. Yes, maybe they got weaker by the time these events occurred, but in this case they should not have posed any threat at all to mankind.
Maybe I just did not get the story but for the reasons that I described above, it failed to impress me.
The thing that I ask myself is this: I know that Lovecraft uses this style throughout most of his stories. Are they the same as this one or are some better and still effective in this day and age?
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Darthwing Teorist on Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:14 am, edited 1 time in total.
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