This was something I noted that seemed like it may or may not have been a case of inadvertent missing of a core point..
Darthwing Teorist wrote:I was looking forward to learn more about them and the horrors that they unleashed but was very disappointed to learn that all they did was stirring some anomalous wind. When the main character fell into their domain through a chasm, what did he do? He actually swam upward THROUGH THEM and got away free! For beings that terrorized the mightiest race known to have walked (or shambled) the earth, they did not seem able to do much harm, if a tired, half-crazy middle aged scientist managed to get away unscathed from them. Yes, maybe they got weaker by the time these events occurred, but in this case they should not have posed any threat at all to mankind.
In general, "Lovecraftian" horror isn't about powerful things that hate humanity. It is about absurdly powerful things that do not particularly recognize humanity at all, doing things that are less than completely comprehensible. They are not malevolent, they are apathetic. You won't see much in the way of grand plots to destroy humanity. You'll see grand plots to... turn all the milk purple? perhaps, something strange, unnatural, and probably can't be a good thing but the reasoning is completely over your head.. and if you try to stop it, the reaction you'll get isn't "Those kids! Stop them!" but closer to "Fruit fly landed on my touch screen and clicked the wrong link, lol".
The reader is intended to feel akin to a very small animal in a patch of forest who is only vaguely becoming aware, with its animal-level intelligence, not only that humans exist, but that its nest and the forest around it is probably going to be affected by, say, the details of multinational Wall Street insider trading and a major real estate development controversy involving leveraged stocks and a court case regarding certain intricacies of Scientology that might affect the path of a planned freeway. That is, "You are all but powerless to do anything meaningful, none of the players involved recognize that you exist, you can mess with them, but they'll just laugh it off as a cute joke, and it's all based around a bunch of things that make no sense to you and that you will never in your life be able to grasp the most rudimentary basics of."